Friday, 29 January 2016

Blog Q+A Part 1

Q+A
14. What are the themes that occur in ‘An Inspector Calls’?
The main themes that the text explores are that of:
a)      Socialism vs Capitalism – mainly looking at the negatives of Capitalism and its negative effect on society. To an extent Priestley is blaming the Capitalist system and the people who support it and benefit from it for the death of Eva Smith. He uses the play to say that the system allows people to only care for themselves and not others.
b)      Younger Generation vs. Older Generation – there is a clear divide that forms between Sheila and Eric and their parents by the end as the younger generation take responsibility for their role in the death of Eva, this creates hope for the future.
c)      Class System – the play explores the class divide and the extent to which class ruled and affected people’s lives and chances
This is not an exhaustive list but just some of the obvious ideas present in the text that Priestley explores.
5. How do I make an inference?
Think to yourself – what is hinted at here? What is this a clue about? What else is here but I can’t see? Imagine the role of reader as investigator and you are getting information from a suspect (the text) – they are not saying everything but you need to analyse closely what they say and work out what is beneath the surface. What are they not saying? E.g. I hate Monday to Friday. Well I am hinting that I love the weekend.
6. I would like to work on my English Grammar
In the Conflict cluster, do I need to analyse the poem and state its literary technique?
Be careful here, you are not ‘touring the poem’ i.e. taking all of your knowledge and putting it down on paper in the exam. You choose what knowledge/ quotes you use in the exam based on the question and the other poem you are comparing it with.  Think of the essay question as a filter through which you filter what you use in your essay. You need to know the main idea in each poem/ what the poet is trying to convey (this will be linked to conflict) and then choose quotes which show this. In analysis it is useful to state the technique to impress the examiner but you do not get marks for this, you get marks for analysing the effect of the technique.
16a) In the conflict cluster, what techniques do you have for remembering the poems and remembering the ones that link?
This is a tough one as it simply requires you to revise, revise, revise to make sure you get this information/ knowledge into your  ‘filing cabinet’. I suggest the following techniques:
-          Start with the poem and make the following notes 1 – full sentences then get rid of the poem 2 – bullet points 3 – mindmap 4 – key words then go to a blank piece of paper and build it up by reversing the process so blank paper – key words – mindmap – bullet points – essay.
-          Post it notes with a key sentence covering the main idea of each poem
-          Use the recordings and play when you are cleaning/ tidying etc. It will drip in to your brain
-          The more time you spend with the poems, the better friends you will become.
b) In Q3 of the language paper, how would you explain a thought/ feeling
The thought or feeling needs to be inferred from the text. This question is assessing your inference skills. Look at the vocabulary/ word choice/ actions and this should help you identify how the speaker  feels/ is thinking. Remember to use:
The speaker feels/ think…
We can see this when we are told:
From this I can infer that/ this tells the reader that…
Q3 – What is the best method to analyse the theme of an unseen poem?
Identify the main theme by first reading the question. The question focus will tell you the main theme of the poem. You then analyse the theme through looking at the language devices the writer has used and what the effect of this is. This will tie in to the main theme.
Q18 a) What are the poems in the Conflict Cluster which have extended metaphor?
This is not a common technique however:
Belfast Confetti uses the extended metaphor of punctuation to signify the violence
Flag uses the extended metaphor of the flag for nationalistic pride
The Falling Leaves uses the extended metaphor of leaves to represent the soldiers
Hawk Roosting – the hawk is the dictator
You could argue the drink is a slightly extended metaphor in At the Border…

Q18b) Which lines from ‘At the Border, 1979’ are good at extracting a lot of information?
So here you need to think where are the techniques? But remember – the beauty of English is the different interpretations and so everyone interprets lines/quotes differently so there are no such things as the ‘best lines’.
“Soon everything would taste different”
“divided by a tick iron chain”
Contrast of: “Autumn soil continued on the other side with the same colour, the same texture” and “the roads are much cleaner the landscape is more beautiful and people are much kinder” – zoom in on both of these but also notice the differing opinions between the speaker and mother.



Thursday, 28 January 2016

Week beginning 1st February = Catch up week

Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday = 8.00-8.40 Intervention on Creative Writing

Monday - Word Choice
Tuesday - Less is more, making reader's infer and sentence structure
Wednesday - Technique Tornado
Thursday - Timelines, over what duration should my story be

Friday class time will be when the Creative Writing Controlled Assessment will be undertaken.

Tuesday, 19 January 2016

As Wednesday calls = An Inspector Calls!
Every Wednesday form tomorrow 130pm we are rereading the play.

What ideas does Priestley present about relationships?
Modern Texts (AIC) What Am I being Assessed on:
Strand 1 – response to the task
Strand2 – response to the text
3 – use of quotes
4 – analysis of language and structure choices
5 – ideas/themes


‘An Inspector Calls’ is a play by J.B. Priestley in which several ideas about relationships, mostly negative, are explored. The play follows the events of an evening which forces all of the characters to review their relationships with one another, ultimately the relationships are all further damaged as events unfold and truths are revealed. As uncomfortable truths unfold, all of the characters must consider how responsible they are for the death of Eva Smith either due to their direct or indirect actions. Ultimately Priestly is commenting harshly on the Capitalist society of pre WW1 Britain, and the distant and negative relationships between the different members of society.





One idea that Priestley presents about relationships is that they are conducted mostly for personal gain, whether that be for financial gain or physical pleasure. This idea about relationships can be seen in the relationship between Mr Birling and Gerald. Despite his daughter becoming engaged to Gerald, Mr Birling’s main concern and delight is derived from the fact that the union of the two families will cause closer work ties and : “lower costs and higher prices”.  This shows his primary concern is one of money, therefore highlighting his capitalist values and use of relationships for personal gain. Furthermore the contrast present in his words highlights the huge contrast between the classes in the society Priestley writes of as , quite literally, the ‘higher’ class have gained much more and the ‘lower’ class have nothing. The juxtaposition between the costs to make and the price sold also highlights, not only the inequality of society, the unfairness and actually the abuse of the lower classes by and for the gain of the upper class.  This is also highlighted through Eva’s dealing with Mr Birling in the factory. In addition the very fact that Mr Birling offers his “congratulations” after he has discussed the impact of the engagement on his business, furthers the idea that relationships are conducted for personal gain. It also must be noted that we have been made very aware that  Gerald is of the upper class and the match is one that further heightens the Birlings’ place in society (however it perhaps lessens the Croft’s place in society), therefore the family as a whole gain from the match. This relationship and many others highlight that relationships are conducted and used for personal gain frequently in the text, highlighting the selfish nature of the Capitalist society.

Monday, 11 January 2016

Intervention preparation for Wednesday lunchtime session:

Read the following and consider. What is the extended metaphor?

HAD I the heavens' embroidered cloths,
Enwrought with golden and silver light,
The blue and the dim and the dark cloths
Of night and light and the half-light,
I would spread the cloths under your feet:
But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Tread softly because you tread on my dreams. 

Friday, 8 January 2016

Great link to An Inspector Calls BBC Adaptation Character profiles :

http://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/profiles/y6Z8WmdMp8tBynLm08wpbQ/characters